Ice cream machine advertisements

Posted by Mrs Heyhoe on 09/02/15 at 08:50 PM

In our writing group, some children from Years 5 and 6 have been writing advertisements for ice cream machines. Firstly, they drafted their adverts. Secondly, they read each other’s writing to check for mistakes and edited their writing. Finally, they wrote their adverts neatly.



Ice cream machine advertisements
Ice cream machine advertisements
Ice cream machine advertisements
Ice cream machine advertisements
Ice cream machine advertisements
Ice cream machine advertisements
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